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Too Much Eyeliner
Jackass
Too Much Eyeliner
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Gender: Female
Posts: 1297

Mibba
May 28th, 2006 at 04:42pm
I lost my sense of feeling.
Have you seen it?
I lost my sense of self control.
Have you seen it?
I lost myself.
Have you seen me?

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I was bored.
[Your Best Mistake]
Idiot
[Your Best Mistake]
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 551
May 28th, 2006 at 04:51pm
It's okay, pretty short, and it just works well. Well done!
Sara.
This Board Is My Home
Sara.
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 31155
May 28th, 2006 at 05:00pm
Billie's_Fuckmonkey:
It's okay, pretty short, and it just works well. Well done!
Too Much Eyeliner
Jackass
Too Much Eyeliner
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 1297

Mibba
May 28th, 2006 at 05:13pm
Thankies.
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
love.
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 2844
May 28th, 2006 at 07:06pm
its really short, but good! Smile
whersermind
Geek
whersermind
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 165

Mibba
May 30th, 2006 at 12:12am
ooh, tis cool....
Baguelle
King For A Couple Of Days
Baguelle
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 2727
May 30th, 2006 at 04:16am
I like it. It's short, but that makes it to-the-point. It's great.
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