Backstage Love
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| Ex.Of.A.Freak.-TCD Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 86 Gender: Female Posts: 5844  | For every waking moment, In the never-ending light, I slowly grow to realize, Love is fading from my sight. For every fallen tear, And every spoken lie, I’ve torn apart her heart, And made her want to cry. I thought she really loved me, So I handed her my heart. Mistakes are made, and that was one, So now I’m torn apart.  ~Not the best.. HONESTLY.... I was just in Poetry mode.. O_o |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 2921  | I LOVELOVE the first stanza. As for the whole thing, it flowed really well and while it became a bit predictable, it was still really good. In conclusion:  |
| What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 2451 | [Flawless Error]: *nods* yup. The second stanza is a bit cliché and average though as is the last. But written in a good way, if you know what I mean. |
| Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | I really loved it  It didn't sound at all forced, because it had a good beat it.Great job! |
| clark GSBitch  Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 79047 | Well done. |
| rollerpig GSBitch  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | |
| Meski Addict Age: 31 Gender: Male Posts: 14856 | |
| Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home  Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 30801 | |
| love. King For A Couple Of Days  Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 | i like it. Its really good  |
| Inari King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 |
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