*they_call_me Ri*
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | May 29th, 2006 at 02:51pm Life is a dream like state
One of which we can't escape
Will I surrender?
Will I fall?
They will be waiting for our call.
I hear their whispers in the dead of night.
These circumstances; we have to fight.
Tonight we will not fall.
Just strike the match and let it burn
A humble favor I must return.
I will not be silenced anymore
Go ahead kick donw the door.
Kiss ur bullets and say goodbye
The taste of revenge, I cannot deny.
idk..why i wrote this... |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | May 29th, 2006 at 02:53pm I like it. It had a pretty nice flow and the rhymes weren't very forced at all. Good job!  |
