Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 29th, 2006 at 03:21pm
Inspired by a weird short-story I wrote.
It's bad because I'm ill.
She never did like waking with the sun tracing its spotlight
fingertips over the smudged kiss stains of lust painted on her lips.
And yet she always did when her insecurities craved for alcoholic amusement.
Her body tuned tight to sexual gratification, her mind pulsing as
heavily as the clouded hangover reigning in her conscience.
Guilty pleasures as the dregs at the bottom of the shot glass on the bar,
kaleidscopic vision of drunk release, alley encounters of the perverted kind.
And she always cowered from the truth when it burnt with tequila kisses.
Sober reminiscings always blushed her into shame;crimson figurines.
The faces she couldn't name but still taste on her body an eternity after,
the nicotine in her bloodstream, her night-shadowed highs under
ashen shades of moonlight that would always conceal her perverted side.
No one but her and her cinnamon ecstacies knew her tainted reality.
She'd always scour it away under a molten shower in the morning
just before the night-shift would yawn into closure, before his hands
would claim the places that her intoxication's hand owned before.
It was always a gamble and trade existence; a prostituting housewife.
Her loose ends were bundled into envelopes with "I owe you" carved
in violent, shark-bite formations on the back: I owe you the truth.
Bisexuality was the burden for the weak, the lock to her secrets,
the scent of sex on her skin when she woke in crumpled sheets of loneliness.
She'd only regret the aftermath; the shackled secrecy, the withdrawal
and the cautious distance she'd maintain so he wouldn't taste
the layers of venom truths that embalmed her lips like a contradiction.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
May 29th, 2006 at 03:27pm
It's not bad. Nothing you write could ever be bad.
In fact, I love it a lot. I adore the way you write about alcohol and people with messy lives. It adds a sort of beauty to the harsh reality.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 29th, 2006 at 03:42pm
Lol.
I always tend to do that, don't I?
Maybe I have a raving alcoholic inside me somewhere.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
May 29th, 2006 at 03:44pm
You raving alcoholic, you. Tsk tsk.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 29th, 2006 at 03:55pm
[Flawless Error]:
You raving alcoholic, you. Tsk tsk.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161
May 29th, 2006 at 03:56pm
I adore it. Maybe it speaks to me at the moment, but I absolutely ADORE it. I love the whole first two verses to death.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 29th, 2006 at 04:02pm
Aww thank you, honey bunny!
love. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844
May 29th, 2006 at 06:43pm
i liked it.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912
May 30th, 2006 at 10:48am
I sooooooooooooooo loved it.
Damn, you're such an awsome poem.
You know I'd start a fan club or something,
if I could.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
May 30th, 2006 at 10:50am
*whatsername_armstrong27*:
i liked it.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 30th, 2006 at 02:12pm
snowcherry:
You know I'd start a fan club or something,
if I could.
"No one but her and her cinnamon ecstacies knew her tainted reality.
She'd always scour it away under a molten shower in the morning
just before the night-shift would yawn into closure, before his hands
would claim the places that her intoxication's hand owned before. "
That segement was absolutely gorgeous.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912
May 30th, 2006 at 02:17pm
Inari:
snowcherry:
You know I'd start a fan club or something,
if I could.
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801
May 30th, 2006 at 03:15pm
I_worship_tre_Cool:
"No one but her and her cinnamon ecstacies knew her tainted reality.
She'd always scour it away under a molten shower in the morning
just before the night-shift would yawn into closure, before his hands
would claim the places that her intoxication's hand owned before. "
That segement was absolutely gorgeous.
You are amazing.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538
May 30th, 2006 at 03:55pm
Wow!
Thank you guys.
Miley Cyrus Basket Case Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 15185
But I wanted one!
