"I Love You" Is Such A Cliché

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Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	May 30th, 2006 at 01:09am Butterflies float about in my stomach. An exchanging of something beautiful. It feels as if I am free now. Free to speak my thoughts of lust, love, a life with you. We gave each other our hearts, our words. Such beautiful words. Your smile was poetry, flowing freely, dancing across your face. Love, such a beautiful plauge. It's such a popular epidemic, over-looked just like a common cold. It's like chicken-pox. We all have it, but once it's gone, it's not coming back. Your apologies were so frequent, I swear you had them well rehearsed. Saying sorry for nothing. You say you wanted to make things better, but you only wanted attention. That repetition made me ill. The chemicals that had stained your heart are slowly tearing me down. The butterflies weaken, I float back down to earth, into your arms. We lay beneath the trees. You'll never let me go. All I want is to be free.
punk_thrash_chick Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 14	May 30th, 2006 at 01:59am nice i can so relate to ur shit
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	May 30th, 2006 at 05:54am Awwww, I really liked that It flowed well, and had some awesome metaphors (eg, chickenpox) I adored this verse; 'The chemicals that had stained your heart are slowly tearing me down. The butterflies weaken, I float back down to earth, into your arms. We lay beneath the trees. '
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	May 30th, 2006 at 07:35am Wow. That is so incredibly beautiful. I'm in awe.
snow job. Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 188	May 30th, 2006 at 11:32am Wow, beautiful. That's all I can really say...
Elegantly Wasted King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2625	May 30th, 2006 at 11:46am ooh... i love. its beautiful^34890752465337
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	May 30th, 2006 at 03:06pm Wow. Thanks sooo so much you guys.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	May 30th, 2006 at 03:08pm That was awesome. Great use of metaphors, really beautiful.
whersermind Geek Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 165	May 30th, 2006 at 03:09pm wow. i love it.
love. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844	June 1st, 2006 at 06:26pm really good...loved it
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	June 2nd, 2006 at 03:10am Thanks, all.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 2nd, 2006 at 09:06am WOW!!!1 It's awesome =D BEATSTEAKS AVATAR =O=D
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645	June 2nd, 2006 at 09:09am Simply beautiful.. had a really elegant feel to it =) I like your avatar too
Krackers Had A Life Before GSB Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 27675	June 2nd, 2006 at 09:10am Incredible.
Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801	June 2nd, 2006 at 07:08pm =] Spank you all. ZomiGah iTz JeSus!1!!!11!11! I made my ava.

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