Spirit of 1977
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 58 | May 30th, 2006 at 09:30am hahaha, this is a random song about this theory me and my friends had about good charlotte using subliminal messages in their songs to get people to like them.
growing trouble for the USA,
"punk rock" marketing's greatest scheme.
highest bidders on your mind,
but i wont let them brainwash mine.
expansion to the PCA,
their musical legacy is such a shame.
miss the one they left behind.
now they're the frontmen of millions of shrines.
sold themselves to the industry.
now they're pop culture's latest craze.
greedy, pistols' wannabes.
it'll take death to end this phase.
your souls up for auction
but you wont buy yourself back.
you just keep jamming to that fake punk
and dressing in black.
all the "teeny boppers" screaming "he's so hot!",
makes me wanna cover them in snot.
all the obsession has made this band worse.
over-exposure has been such a curse. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 2538 | May 30th, 2006 at 09:51am That's interesting.
Shows passion and potential. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
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 | May 30th, 2006 at 03:06pm This is also okay. The flow isn't very good. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
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 | May 30th, 2006 at 03:11pm Inari:That's interesting.
Shows passion and potential. I thought the flow was decent. None of my poems flow, lol. I liked the second stanza the best. |
Spirit of 1977
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 58 | May 30th, 2006 at 06:01pm well, it's not suppossed to be super serious, guys. it's part of a joke.  |
ladyramone
Post Whore
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Posts: 21701 | May 30th, 2006 at 06:17pm sweet 
you're a kick ass writer |
