totoro
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 | June 1st, 2006 at 10:52am No one really seem to notice
And I don’t want them to
Only you have seen it
But you won’t tell them, will you?
Only you can see it
I’ve seen the way you look at me
That’s how I know you see it
What no one else have seen
‘Cause though it is a secret
You saw it all the time
You just never mentioned it
And won’t do it in a while
I think you know why I do it
I see it in your eyes
You know so well the feeling
One of those I hide
‘Cause though you try to hide it
I know you do the same
I’ve noticed what you’re doing
I’ve seen it every day
We are both so stupid
No one should be doing this
But yet we do it all the time
Enjoy it while we cry
To feel it you must do it
A strange sort of pain
It’s not just hurting outside
But in your soul as well
When it start’s bleeding
You’re not just bleeding blood
You’re bleeding all your love
All my love is gone |
Kurtni
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 | June 1st, 2006 at 10:54am  It's better than all the other cutter poems, and the first few stanza's were amazing, OSM. |
rollerpig
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Posts: 62283 | June 1st, 2006 at 11:45am I liked it better til I noticed it's about Cutting .. |
newagecarny
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| June 1st, 2006 at 01:05pm Improve your grammar please. |
Peter Petrelli
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Posts: 4161 | June 1st, 2006 at 01:09pm Punctuation helps too. Too cliched. |
Meski
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| June 1st, 2006 at 01:27pm nice poem |
love.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Posts: 2844 | June 1st, 2006 at 02:12pm its ok  |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
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| June 1st, 2006 at 02:47pm It's okay, I guess. |
OMG, Shoes.
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Posts: 332 | June 1st, 2006 at 02:49pm Yet another poem to cut to. Lovely. The world NEEDS more of those *rolls eyes* |
