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Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 1st, 2006 at 12:17pm Plummeting spirals of complexity, twines of metaphors.
There was no real beauty in cobwebbed poetry
when all it'd reveal was the dregs and dust of hubris.
The mind is sewn on the sleeve of an artist but the gown
frays and fades with expectation. Conventional restraint,
shackled echoes from experimental minds, protean art condemned.
A caged bird can never sing lullabies with clipped wings.
I'm dabbling in witchcraft literacy to conjure poetry without words.
Picture book similes from the subjugated poet. A new best seller.
People will buy into left-over imagery, the rinds of a masterpiece,
the rings that remain from a sharpened ego. But rarely renascent art.
Dictionaries burnt at stakes of discontent and the air is purged with ash.
Because intelligence is only expectation bound in a graduation gown
and the world has become too impatient to adopt a thinking attitude.
Repercussions reverberate on pure forms of expression until
they're no more than cemented scrawls of nerves on tar paper,
shallow echoes on copper surfaces, third-rate forms of rendition.
The compensation prize for the predilection we've now absorbed
like a fashion statement that's gone too stale to fit. |
rollerpig GSBitch
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | June 1st, 2006 at 12:29pm WOW  |
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451
| June 1st, 2006 at 12:34pm See, you haven’t lost it.
Awesome poem. |
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912 | June 1st, 2006 at 12:35pm *smirks*
That was awsome, darling. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 1st, 2006 at 12:37pm Thank you guys.  |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | June 1st, 2006 at 01:01pm
Dude.
I love you.
'I'm dabbling in witchcraft literacy to conjure poetry without words.
Picture book similes from the subjugated poet. A new best seller.'
Amazing. |
love. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: Female Posts: 2844 | June 1st, 2006 at 02:17pm very, very, very good |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 1st, 2006 at 02:25pm 
Thank you guys.
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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 1st, 2006 at 03:58pm Excelente!  That was AMAZING. <3333 |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 2nd, 2006 at 06:19am Thank you Panda.
Lol. Loving the name. |
[[PoliticalPunk.]] Geek
![[[PoliticalPunk.]]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 182
 | June 2nd, 2006 at 07:44am love it.
you are brillaint. |
11th Street Kid King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3645 | June 2nd, 2006 at 08:55am Man, I haven't been on here for ages.
That was... brilliant. Gahh.. it's so.. creative.. and.. and.. indescribable. |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 2nd, 2006 at 01:00pm Wow.
Thank you guys. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 2nd, 2006 at 02:35pm Inari:Thank you Panda.
Lol. Loving the name. You're welcome.
Hah, I figured since people already called me Panda, it worked. Not to mention I'm totally hardcore.  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 2nd, 2006 at 02:45pm Hardcore Panda!!1:You're welcome.
Hah, I figured since people already called me Panda, it worked. Not to mention I'm totally hardcore. 
Totally!
And now I can call you a poetic panda!
Ooooh!
Can I keep you as a pet?
I promise to water, walk and feed you every day. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| June 2nd, 2006 at 02:47pm d00d, I always wanted to be somebody's pet! =O
Now do I get a treat?  |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | June 2nd, 2006 at 02:51pm Yaaaay!
Sure, you do.
*hands you a treat* |