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newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 2nd, 2006 at 10:19am He waits on the bus stop of his dismissal; Fouled, shivering palms squeeze the bottle Filled with high amount of artificial remedy. He ended up the same dirtbag his father was. Yet his inspiration bloomed despite the naked branches, Raped by the raging, furious, february wind. This year Valentines Day left him stranded On shores of decapitated seagulls and sharp sand. This catholic wants help from no god. He only craves an oasis of little privilege. Boy, you seemed to know it all too well, Still you trust ethanol to take you to a better place.
Meski Addict Age: 32 Gender: Male Posts: 14856	June 2nd, 2006 at 10:24am very very nice poem!!
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 2nd, 2006 at 11:25am Wow, that was different, You word choice was kind of wierd, but so was the poem, so it worked well. I liked how you used sets of adjectives, not just one, it had a nice effect. Great job.
Nicky and Cambria. Haha. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2787	June 2nd, 2006 at 11:25am <3333
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 2nd, 2006 at 11:30am Thank you <3
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 2nd, 2006 at 11:36am I love it =O
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	June 2nd, 2006 at 12:36pm dies from amazement dies again I love it. I really love it. It's powerful, thought provoking, and it even LOOKS good
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	June 2nd, 2006 at 12:57pm Wow. I absolutely loved that!
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 2nd, 2006 at 01:06pm international_idiot: dies from amazement dies again I love it. I really love it. It's powerful, thought provoking, and it even LOOKS good Aw shucks.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 2nd, 2006 at 01:13pm That was amazing. Loved it.
Bleach Rotting On Here Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 47505	June 2nd, 2006 at 01:49pm international_idiot: dies from amazement dies again I love it. I really love it. It's powerful, thought provoking, and it even LOOKS good what she said
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 2nd, 2006 at 03:37pm Decapitated seagulls. Now there's a cool image. The poem was beauteous. <3
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 2nd, 2006 at 03:44pm Hardcore Panda!!1: Decapitated seagulls. Now there's a cool image. The poem was beauteous. <3 No, I am not sick minded. It was just to enhance the misery. xD And thanks. <33

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