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snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 3rd, 2006 at 06:49pm Melt the drops of salted despair on my face Frozen in the stinging cold this air's holding And wipe them away in a slow and soft motion If your silken skin can brush the pain away Just like vodka cloud-solutions And aspirin daze-applications Stinging my eyes of fiery bloodshot malady Blinded eyes refuse to see vicious anguish of the mind I've got a fever above my waist that's raging Gentleness keeping it dwelling in my chest Malicious glee causing breaks into shivers Strange victories in miserable conditions It's the withdrawal symptoms And the cold of solitude Insomnia's been my friend from immemorial times As are the ghost lights keeping me here tonight Amongst all the nightmares you're tangled in my dreams Mere safety for seconds against hours of distress Contorted thoughts always led to twisted words But in your presence my lips never dared to lie Love-struck in awe But I need you tonight If your lips move in love's confessions to the dark Dash away the despair lingering upon my heart
Lor Geek Age: 84 Gender: Female Posts: 476	June 3rd, 2006 at 07:01pm Bravissimo!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 3rd, 2006 at 07:18pm Excellent poem. Excellent ending. Cool picture. Conclusion: You = Excellent.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 3rd, 2006 at 09:05pm Hardcore Panda!!1: Excellent poem. Excellent ending. Cool picture. Conclusion: You = Excellent. That coming from you is a huge compliment. Thank you.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 3rd, 2006 at 09:06pm Matrixx: Bravissimo! Thank you. You're ava's such a cutie.
Xxwhite_rosexX Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 71	June 3rd, 2006 at 09:12pm bless you
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	June 4th, 2006 at 05:44am That is amazing darling. I agree with my pet Panda. Conclusion: You = Excellent.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	June 4th, 2006 at 05:46am You = Mass collapse of poets everywhere It's amazing.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 4th, 2006 at 06:39am Awwww, thank you, my poetic darlings.
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 4th, 2006 at 06:53am Oh, you're magic with words
Skullivan.[Im Not Okay] Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 225	June 4th, 2006 at 06:58am ........... is speechless ............ The most amazing and beautiful poem!
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 4th, 2006 at 10:46am Oh, wow... thank you!
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 4th, 2006 at 12:42pm Great! I love how you've proven that you don't need big words to make it work. Keep it up.
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 5th, 2006 at 07:59am Ella: Great! I love how you've proven that you don't need big words to make it work. Keep it up. Thank you. I'm not too great with big words. That's darling Inari's trademark kinda thing.
What's in a name? King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 2451	June 6th, 2006 at 03:10pm That is indeed an excellent poem. I love it. Aaaaand, I’m gonna save and treasure it forever.

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