Ghostie.
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 | June 6th, 2006 at 08:51pm Please tell me what you think, honestly. I wrote it last night, and would like opinions! Thanks.
Does everything seem dismal?
Boring, or subliminal?
My life's losing excitement, but I'm at the top of my game.
Or maybe I'm just being put to shame.
Reckless, hopeless,
Life's not painless.
Reckless, hopeless,
Life's not painless.
My head's in the sky,
Too tough to die,
Or am I?
Not going to say hello, I'll only have to say goodbye.
Reckless, hopeless,
Life's not painless.
Reckless, hopeless,
Life's a pain, no less. |
OMG, Shoes.
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Posts: 332 | June 6th, 2006 at 08:53pm That is amazing. Good job =] |
Ghostie.
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| June 6th, 2006 at 08:55pm Thanks! -feels all happy inside- |
Toxic Teeth
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| June 6th, 2006 at 09:10pm I really like the morals that are in the lyrics.
Its a great song!  |
love.
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Posts: 2844 | June 6th, 2006 at 09:20pm good  |
Last Kennedy Alive
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Posts: 324 | June 6th, 2006 at 09:28pm it's ok
but maybe you could express your point of view a bit more |
xXx depressed_emo xXx
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Posts: 186 | June 8th, 2006 at 06:50am fukin awesome lol |
