poem for music lesson

ok so for music i need to write a song my teacher
said its alright if i want to use poems ive wrote and i cant decide which i like better so far i have please tell me which one you prefer cause it would help alot thanks


1) [not finished yet thou ]
i close my eyes and all i can do is cry
i rest my head down to sleep
as the tears roll down my face
the memories are still tarnished upon my lips
and i cant forget the moment we last touched
and your kiss is as sweet as the poison you fed me
and your smell is like a drug
im hypnotised by your smile
i fall for your charm everytime
is this really love or just another reason to cry

i wish i could hold your hand
and lay in your arms
look you in the eye
and ask you honestly is this a lie?
turn out the lights
and lay next to me
come dry all my tears away

im so in love with you
and i cant stop
everytime i hear your voice
my heart melts
but how to i know its the truth
how do i know its not just another line
am i just another girl
youv twisted with your charm

am i who you love
or am i just a constant reminder
of what youv tried to leave behind
do you think of me often?
do you even care



2)i try to smile and pretend that everythings alright
just paint a picture on my face and everything will be fine
i cant let you see me breaking down in tears
i wont let you be the one to watch me as i runaway from my fears

i lay my head down
and the tears begin to flow
this is the side of me that i never let show
these painful scars that i hide
and the truth that lies behind these eyes
all the memories iv tried to forget
and all these endless regrets

i bite my tounge
and hold back
the things i dream to say
cause there the words that you dred to hear

the tears still roll down my face
and none of you understand
the pain im holding back
so i smile and tell you everythings just fine
but the truth is im slowly dieing inside

im lost without him
and alone around you
this smile i paint upon face
is just a pittyful attempt
to cover up my mistakes

iv lived for so long hideing in the dark
afraid of what you`d think
and how you`d wonder why i didnt get help
its all in the past and there just painful memories
i cant stand these fakes that try to be me

depression isnt a game that we play
these tears i cry are real
and that frown of yours is fake
i dont know what you feel
but iv seen that smile
and theres no reason to pretend your someone else
iv seen your smile and ive seen your tears
but im not sure which is real

all iv ever tried to be
was a better person
but im just a mistake
im better off not breathing

I like the first one better. =]

Ooh. They're pretty! I really like the first one.

beautiful