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Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 23 | June 9th, 2006 at 10:28pm when you lose the game
do you truly lose?
When you lost everything
did the loss encourage you?
when life gets you down
do you try to pick it back up?
when you curse
do you curse at life?
when you di inside
do you truly die?
when the world is screwed up
do you still live life to the fullest?
when you cut and bleed
do you want to live?
when you die
are you truly dead?
-Faith
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Posts: 78 | June 10th, 2006 at 07:21am me likes.
it needs more of an ending though... one that isnt like the rest of the poem. even though, its like death, and death is the end and all that. i reckon it should be a statement. not a question...
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