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Posts: 78 | June 10th, 2006 at 08:54am "running away,
running to you,
tripping on glass,
with a slight laugh,
tripping again,
need the pain,
will i ever get back up?..."
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yes, like i said... my poems = shortness, as they have to fit in texts that i send to my friend... alright? yes... good. |
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Posts: 78 | June 19th, 2006 at 06:04am hehe, no comments! hurrah! aww... i wanna comment. anyone have ANYTHING at all to say? |
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 | June 19th, 2006 at 06:18am very good I like the way you write poems! |
Lissie!
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| June 19th, 2006 at 06:20am They're good but you dont need to put the ""'s around |
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Posts: 78 | June 19th, 2006 at 10:05am mm, i know i dont have to use the " but its a habbit, it comes with the text messages, at the end i leave a little poem thats in inverted comma's or whatever... and yeah... so i still leave them on when i come here! |
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Posts: 2844 | June 19th, 2006 at 05:04pm really good! |
