In The Distance.

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Nerdosaurus
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Nerdosaurus
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5559
June 10th, 2006 at 08:09pm
I made this up about 3 minutes ago so I appoligise if it's not that good.

Do you see my face in the distance?
I see yours,
It shines so brightly
Like a star
But its not you
It's my mind playing tricks
I wish these would stop
Your already gone
I burried you last week
The hardest day of my life

Do you still see my face in the distance?
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Mibba
June 10th, 2006 at 08:11pm
It's okay, not the greatest.
Santa Billie
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Santa Billie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285
June 10th, 2006 at 08:14pm
That's nice.

Some poems only take five minutes, that's like with everything...

It just depends on the moment, the mood that you're in...

When you can capture that feeling at that exact time, it's just perfect.

I think that's what this poem is...

Simple, but I love it Smile
Nerdosaurus
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Nerdosaurus
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 5559
June 11th, 2006 at 12:13pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
It's okay, not the greatest.
Yeah I know i'm not that good at poetry
Rebel.
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Mibba
June 11th, 2006 at 12:20pm
It's quite good.
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