Tales Of Sunshine Girls And Rain-Drop Issues

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snowcherry
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June 11th, 2006 at 04:28pm
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Sunshine girls never chose to hang
With girls born from rain drop-desire
Drew borderlines of bright reflections
Keeping their distance with darkened eyes
Praising their rules
Praising perfection
Give everything, dear, it's not enough to try
Boosting persuation to make you believe
Make you believe you're what you want to be

So I find myself lost in burrows of confusion
Amidst contagious phantasies
Cliff-hangers bound to bore right through you
If you ever dare to step out and fall
But what if he's nothing to me .. and she's my everything?
I'm dangling dangerously over the abysmal oceans
That leave you to drown
Smothering in your own un-holy sins
Not even your thoughts truly belong to only you

Not even in the darkest hours of night
When there's only me and my shadow
Still my guilt and my conscience are crushing me
If I catch myself dreaming of her .. dreaming of us
Craving her lips in a kiss with passion
The scathing call of the oceans reaches my ears
Echoing in my mind endlessly with back-pressure
You're a fool to think you ever owned your dreams

I once heard someone falling into the oceans
He screamed as he fell, his eyes turning black
Those of human kind can never find
Happiness within their lives

And seeing myself here in perfection's picture
Him by my side instead of her
I cannot help thinking he was right with his words
Society's claws drive their nails in so much deeper
Now that they're placed around your neck

Rain-drop girls always refused to hang
With girls born from the light of the sun
Drew borderlines of bright reflections
Keeping their distance with darkened eyes
Praising their rules
Praising perfection
What if it's fate, though, her image in my mind
Kismet giving its regards to converse beliefs

What if I'm losing myself in the rushes
Of anxiety overflowing my blood?
What if I'm haunted by my taunting insecurities?
What if I can't help the way I feel?
What if she...?
What if she doesn't...?





I know it's such a long poem....
Couldn't help it, I guess.
Peter Petrelli
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June 12th, 2006 at 06:01am
Shocked

Girl, you never cease to amaze me.
newagecarny
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Mibba
June 12th, 2006 at 06:11am
-hugs the beautiful poem-
snowcherry
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June 12th, 2006 at 06:20am
Awwww, thank you, my sweethearts. Kiss
rollerpig
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June 12th, 2006 at 09:07am
OMG. FORGET WHAT I EVER SAID XD

THAT'S THE MOST BEAUTIFUL POEM .. EVER. Cool
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June 12th, 2006 at 09:12am
That's one of the best poems I've ever read, I also like this part:

What if I'm losing myself in the rushes
Of anxiety overflowing my blood?
What if I'm haunted by my taunting insecurities?
What if I can't help the way I feel?
What if she...?
What if she doesn't...?
Inari
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June 12th, 2006 at 09:13am
That's beautiful.
I love it.
snowcherry
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June 12th, 2006 at 10:36am
Wow, ...thank you, guys.
So much. Grli
love.
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June 12th, 2006 at 10:40am
whoa, this is great! i love it!!!!
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
June 12th, 2006 at 02:41pm
Shocked How did you ever get this good? [Not that you weren't before. XD] My God, that was beautiful.
snowcherry
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June 12th, 2006 at 02:56pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
Shocked How did you ever get this good? [Not that you weren't before. XD] My God, that was beautiful.



lmfao

what a compliment. Razz

Nah, thank you, darling. Wink
snowcherry
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June 13th, 2006 at 09:49am
Thank you, guys. Smile
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