As I Lay Dying What Do You Do?

Board index - Your poetry

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tAcOs!-Jay Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 83	June 12th, 2006 at 02:28pm I've lost all hope And theres no more excuse I've become a loser A worthless user And you spit on me I have no soul to you I'm nothing you look down on me Like I'm not there Like I don't deserve a reason to live To be in your presence You look at me with pityful sorrow And just stand there as I die
Rebel. Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 66	June 12th, 2006 at 02:44pm I like it!
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645	June 12th, 2006 at 02:53pm its cool. its something i would write.............................
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 12th, 2006 at 03:10pm it isnt vivid, it isnt detailed, and it's plain and bland. It has no flow and lacks any creativty. I've become a loser A worthless user DONT take things from Green Day songs, on a Green Day fansite.
righteous whammy barrage Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 53	June 12th, 2006 at 03:13pm Whatshername I don't like your icon thing. Green Day stole that idea from The Who. just instead of using the union jack, Green Day used old glory.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 12th, 2006 at 03:16pm righteous whammy barrage: Whatshername I don't like your icon thing. Green Day stole that idea from The Who. just instead of using the union jack, Green Day used old glory. Was that really necessary? This is a poetry forum. At least post a comment about the poem. Anyway, I pretty much agree with I_worship_tre_Cool.
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 12th, 2006 at 03:16pm righteous whammy barrage: Whatshername I don't like your icon thing. Green Day stole that idea from The Who. just instead of using the union jack, Green Day used old glory. Don't spam. That had nothing to do with the poem.
The Doctor Falling In Love With The Board Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 8786	June 12th, 2006 at 03:16pm Stay on topic... Nice attempt but you shouldn't steal stuff and a bit more work into it
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 12th, 2006 at 03:21pm I_worship_tre_Cool: it isnt vivid, it isnt detailed, and it's plain and bland. It has no flow and lacks any creativty. I've become a loser A worthless user DONT take things from Green Day songs, on a Green Day fansite. At least steal from other musicians XD
tAcOs!-Jay Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: 34 Gender: Male Posts: 83	June 12th, 2006 at 07:17pm ha ha ik sry ppl i couldnt think of nuttin to write about and i was listening to green day when i wrote it.......sry!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lol XD

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