Inexpensive Liquor

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FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 12th, 2006 at 04:14pm No clue what my inspiration for this was; it just sort of...appeared or something. Anyway, I like it. Inexpensive Liquor You know you’re horribly soft And I can feel it when you breathe. You disorient me, just a bit Though you were always A cheap fuck, a blind fuck. Your charm is inexpensive liquor, And your downfall is too. You’re a bargain any day But it’s the wine that rings true. You’re a picture perfect whore One hour photo slut Not much time just makes you even better. You’re a picture perfect whore One hour photo slut And it’s such a shame you were joking. Excused one too many times, It wasn’t the alcohol; it wasn’t. It was always you, and you were A cheap fuck, a blind fuck.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	June 12th, 2006 at 04:15pm Cool. Love it.
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 12th, 2006 at 04:17pm Wow, a Cheap Fuck and a blind fuck, not the type of fuck I would want to be I like it, alcohol related poems always interest me, they can have such strong messages.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 12th, 2006 at 04:19pm Haha, thank you. Yeah, I don't think I've ever sworn in a poem before, but I thought it fit this situation. Gives it that awesome vulgar feel, you know? XD
billie's_little_jinx King For A Couple Of Days Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 2055	June 12th, 2006 at 04:42pm lot's of anger I like it
Glittery George's Geek Age: 31 Gender: Female Posts: 225	June 12th, 2006 at 04:43pm Yeh i like it.
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 12th, 2006 at 04:45pm Thanks, kids.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161	June 13th, 2006 at 06:47am I think I'm in love with this. It's angry, but good angry, not angry for the sake of it. I'm not making any sense, am I?
Whitney. Idiot Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 507	June 13th, 2006 at 07:18am wow i love it! good job
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912	June 13th, 2006 at 09:56am Awwww. I'm so in love with this one!
rollerpig GSBitch Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283	June 13th, 2006 at 10:32am I love it. :]
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921	June 13th, 2006 at 02:40pm Thank you, my poetic muffins. And don't worry, Ellen. I got what you meant.

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