Frater, ave atque vale (Brother, Hello and Goodbye)

Written straight forward, no editing whatsoever and five minutes ago. oh, and I'm a total n00b at this. And not english.



All the tears and all the lies
I know you hated them all....
But they were all for you, for us, for me
the way I thought you wanted it to be...

Tell me who was wrong, it's my only question
My world isn't exactly made of belief
but I know that for a FACT
so it doesn't upset me as much as it hurt you...

A thousand things, none of them lies
You could use them all as your next attack
But when it comes to defence…
You come up short yet again.

Counter-attacks and ignorance
Seemed to be your way of life
But you know what your loss will be
And you know your bad side…

We both know, and I predicted
You haven’t got a single word for defence.
Ill will and anger, neither come from my side
Disappointment, though, is a lonely friend of mine

The edge is my home now, and it’s yours too;
You’re walking on the brim of what you’re losing
You didn’t see it all until you got the outsiders angle.
Doubt and disbelief are your most dangerous friends

And I can see them walking with you.

After all, the outsiders lone fort of knowledge and insight is MY point of view.



-Invidia L.

I really liked that. It had a superb flow going on for the most part and sounded great. It was also simple without being boring. Awesome job.

Oh yeah, like it.



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I really liked that. It had a superb flow going on for the most part and sounded great. It was also simple without being boring. Awesome job.

Thanks! I always have trouble with the flow-part ._. Damn vocabulary.

TreCoolIstSoGeil:

Oh yeah, like it.



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Thanks ^^, appreciated.

That was great.