Author Message Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538June 14th, 2006 at 01:46pm
Now I know where my poetic inspiration has gone....to you!
Honey, that one is my favourite of all you've written.
So beautiful.
Toxic Teeth Idiot Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 645June 14th, 2006 at 01:48pm
Thats very Beautiful!
I Love it!
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538June 14th, 2006 at 01:55pm
[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:I LOVE YOU INARI. *hugs forever*
Matt Smith Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 31134 June 14th, 2006 at 02:28pm
It was beautiful without the Miss Murder lyric...that just completed it.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161June 15th, 2006 at 05:53am
*faints*
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 June 15th, 2006 at 05:58am
Really good!
Favourite parts:
"Pumping a drug of excitement into your veins
Crude comments object to mettlesome attractions"
"The worn jukebox plays the same old tune
Automatic shutters stamp us out
Alcoholics of the day are cured
Maybe the world will stop spinning today"
You are good, it all seems to fit in well and makes sense. Keep up the good work.
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078 June 15th, 2006 at 10:41am
I saw you writing this but didn't realise it was gonna be that random.
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 June 15th, 2006 at 11:54am
Other then the end it was pretty good, the last stanza needs some work, it looks like it will lead somewhere, but then it doesnt. The middle was awesome though.
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078 June 17th, 2006 at 10:22am
It's good nothing better really
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 June 17th, 2006 at 10:54am
[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:Mike's personal sex toy=]:It's good nothing better really
excuse me?!
Its good nothing better?
Their grammar isn't so hot, I think they meant "it's good, Nothing better, really!"
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078 June 17th, 2006 at 10:55am
I_worship_tre_Cool:[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:Mike's personal sex toy=]:It's good nothing better really
excuse me?!
Its good nothing better?
Their grammar isn't so hot, I think they meant "it's good, Nothing better."
yeah I mean what I wrote.
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078 June 17th, 2006 at 10:55am
*meant
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 June 17th, 2006 at 10:56am
Mike's personal sex toy=]:I_worship_tre_Cool:[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:Mike's personal sex toy=]:It's good nothing better really
excuse me?!
Its good nothing better?
Their grammar isn't so hot, I think they meant "it's good, Nothing better, really!"
yeah I mean what I wrote.
What you wrote made no sense
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 June 17th, 2006 at 10:56am
[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:I_worship_tre_Cool:[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:Mike's personal sex toy=]:It's good nothing better really
excuse me?!
Its good nothing better?
Their grammar isn't so hot, I think they meant "it's good, Nothing better."
Oh hokay.
OFFTOPIC: I'm glad we've sorted out the thing between us I_worship_tre_cool.
Ofeh TOpiK- I know, I am too
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 June 17th, 2006 at 11:00am
[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:I_worship_tre_Cool:[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:I_worship_tre_Cool:[x]Poetic Disaster[x]:Mike's personal sex toy=]:It's good nothing better really
excuse me?!
Its good nothing better?
Their grammar isn't so hot, I think they meant "it's good, Nothing better."
Oh hokay.
OFFTOPIC: I'm glad we've sorted out the thing between us I_worship_tre_cool.
Ofeh TOpiK- I know, I am too
offtopic: Why do I find this fun? Writing offtopic? xD
because it's spam and we have to quit
All the stuff you can't do it fun
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 June 17th, 2006 at 11:28am
I love it.