If I Could Wake You Up I Would...

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Dead End Girl Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 10219	June 14th, 2006 at 03:54pm God. Are you guys infecting ME with long-arse-title-itus? Guess so If I Could Wake You Up I Would But For Now You'll Stay Asleep Marijuanna dreams Keep you asleep Let your demons out Let your eyes vein into red Drink me awake Smoke me to sleep The secrets you told me Aren't mine to keep Alcohol days Keep you up at night Help you forget Help you try to forget Drink me awake Smoke me to sleep The secrets you told me Aren't mine to keep La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La La Drink me awake Smoke me to sleep The secrets you told me Aren't mine to keep
Kurtni Admin Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289	June 14th, 2006 at 04:19pm The La La La part wasnt needed and wrecked the poem, other than that it was ok.
Inari King For A Couple Of Days Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538	June 15th, 2006 at 06:00am Sorry. The long title thing may just be my fault lol. It was awesome. I loved it.
newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495	June 15th, 2006 at 06:06am I_worship_tre_Cool: The La La La part wasnt needed and wrecked the poem, other than that it was ok. Well it's probably a song... If it is, the chorus is my favourite part. "Drink me awake Smoke me to sleep The secrets you told me Aren't mine to keep" But for some reason I would change the last line to "Are not mine to keep." I think it would sound better.

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