I liked it alot but can you explain it for me? please!
Okays
It's part of a fantasy story I'm writing. It's about a mortal boy who falls for a faerie princess. The poem is about how he's breaking and transforming into a magical creature just like her, because he loves her so much.
Please don't use my poem as a battlefield *cries*
I only wanted to explain why I chose those words.
And you did and Im glad you did, It helped me to better understand you work. Certain people are just angry with me for actually critiscing a poem and posting what I think of it, like this forum is for, if what I said offended you anywhere please tell me, it's your poem, and what they say isn't bothering me, Im worried about you taking what I said the wrong way.
No, I'm not offended. I just needed to explain why I use metaphors like that, I know it's not an entirely conventional style. I just get so paranoid about people not understanding my work because I'm into fantasy so much.
I appriciate your criticism. I really do.
Ok good, Im glad. There are 3 poets on here I worry about offending, you, Inari, and Snowcherry. Your all amazing and very involved in your work, I can already tell, when Im older I'll be reading your published work, you guys are going to be that good. I just know I have a tendency to be brutally honest sometimes and I don't want my advice to be taken the wrong way because you're all astounding.
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161
June 16th, 2006 at 03:32pm
*huggles you madly*
Thank you
snowcherry King For A Couple Of Days Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 3912
