i need somebody

my herat bleeds of pain
cause of the misery chain
which sorounded my lonley soul
to be with you was my only goal
now i know it was all a lie
and to wait for me to die
all alone all by myself
while u think of yourself
your smile i have to forget
and the day we met
today i start all over again
with the same old pain

aw i quite like it, short but still pretty good i think.

my herat bleeds of pain
Cliché. Unoriginal. I can probable find you 10 other poems that use that phrase.
cause of the misery chain
"cause" should have been because, and the rhyme was forced
which sorounded my lonley soul
That was a good line, but the next one will kill it with the choked rhyme

to be with you was my only goal
now i know it was all a lie
and to wait for me to die
all alone all by myself
while u think of yourself

Think of all the different ways you could have said someone is self centered "while you think of yourself" is so normal, this is a poem, make it jump of the page with creative words.
your smile i have to forget
and the day we met
today i start all over again
with the same old pain