The Breakdown

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TrEsXBiAtChX12
King For A Couple Of Days
TrEsXBiAtChX12
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Posts: 3754
June 20th, 2006 at 11:10am
Shivers
Chills
Roll down her spine
Wait
A moment ago
She was fine

Confusion
Not Knowing
She was Pretending
The Drama
The Struggle
Was never ending

Pain
Depression
Her stomach aches
Lies
The Truth
She was a fake

Time
Movement
All stands still
Sickness
Delusions
Make her ill

One Comment
One Joke
Broke her down
The laughter
The Smiles
Turned into a frown

Aches
Pains
Come as she shakes
Memories
Stress
And her terrible Mistakes

Wondering
Slowly
When will this end
But now
For the Moment
She has to Pretend
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Emily-Cool
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657
June 20th, 2006 at 03:30pm
ooh i quite like it, i like how u've set out the verses and line spacing. nice poem Smile
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