Ms. Murder
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Gender: -
Posts: 38 | June 20th, 2006 at 02:33pm Once there was a boy.
I loved him so,
But now he’s gone.
Forever, he’ll be gone,
For I let his presence in my life disappear,
I know he will never return.
I know that dark place I’ll be stuck in until he comes back to me,
Yet there is Him, who helps me along the way, recover,
And find someone else, who will help me rebuild my heart.
I have one last breath before I go down the phase of regret.
I can’t take it any longer…he’s gone…forever. |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | June 20th, 2006 at 03:28pm The flow is kind of...non-existant.
It's pretty cliche as well, and you don't bring out anything new.
I'd try again. |
Ms. Murder
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 38 | June 20th, 2006 at 06:25pm oh thanks. meanies. |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019
 | June 21st, 2006 at 09:14pm When you say, "Yet there is Him," do you mean God? |
the resistance.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4898
| June 21st, 2006 at 09:17pm Annie Victim:The flow is kind of...non-existant.
It's pretty cliche as well, and you don't bring out anything new.
I'd try again.
I second that. |
Ms. Murder
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 38 | June 22nd, 2006 at 02:11pm yes i do mean god. thats why i capitalized it. |
