*they_call_me Ri*
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | June 21st, 2006 at 09:41am Good morning sunshine.
Good mornig to the last day.
Let the sun rays hit you face.
Don't let the outside world break you down.
Only my words will have that effect.
My actions I kept from you,
Are eating away my heart.
All I have are simple words for you depart.
I'm sorry love theres no words I can say.
It's better off that you no longer stay.
Stop building these walls,
I'm determine to break them down.
Look to the sky,
she's the only one to save you now.
Like a rock in the bottom of my heart,
She's the wedge who drove us apart.
I know you want her,
She wants you too.
Something I could never hold on to,
one love that is true.
Can you tell me who i am,
A heart drowning in your quick sand.
this is shit, but it's wht i real right now, and i can't express it. the structure is shit if there even is one. i'm posting it cause i don't know when i'll be back. bye. |
Meski
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
 | June 21st, 2006 at 09:48am Yeah, cool poem! |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019
 | June 21st, 2006 at 07:36pm I don't think it's shit. It's good. ^_^ |
rolypoly_punk
Idiot
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 627 | June 21st, 2006 at 07:43pm I LIKES IT! ^_^ Good job. |
