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I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019

Mibba
June 21st, 2006 at 09:03pm
I always wanted to be a good girl.
Someone smart and nice.
Not some crazy chick.
Whose full of sugar and spice.

Those who make it sound good.
Will maybe tell you what for.
That the truth about the spice.
Is that you can't get it from a store.

Everyone knows about alcohol and drugs.
But it's not big until you're offered it.
I've always steered away from that.
But why am I now accepting this bullshit?

I've tasted things I've never thought I would.
Even had one smoke or more.
I didn't see what was so great about it.
But still I opened the wrong door.

So maybe I haven't done drugs.
But I could've and might.
Inside I felt excited.
Even though I knew it wouldn't be right.

I've gone through bad times.
And then I grabbed a blade.
I always told my self "This won't help."
But words will always fade.

Now this good girl I dreamt about.
Has shortly disappeared.
As I got older.
I did the things I feared.

I broke promises with my family.
And sadly myself.
I'm no longer a good girl.
She's just another book on the shelf.
the resistance.
King For A Couple Of Days
the resistance.
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4898

Mibba
June 21st, 2006 at 09:23pm
I like it Very Happy
Sara.
This Board Is My Home
Sara.
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 31155
June 21st, 2006 at 09:27pm
That's Awsome.

I Love the ending,
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019

Mibba
June 21st, 2006 at 09:52pm
Thanks. =D
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Toxic Teeth
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645

Blog
June 21st, 2006 at 09:59pm
I LOVE IT!
I really liked the first part because I could really relate to it.....'cept I dont want to be a good girl. Cool
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019

Mibba
June 21st, 2006 at 10:33pm
Yeah, but I meant like.. when I was younger. Like a child. A little girl.
*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5
June 22nd, 2006 at 06:29pm
I love it! =D
Kid_Gates
Geek
Kid_Gates
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 289
June 22nd, 2006 at 06:41pm
'Tis good!
WhitestMonkeh!U'Know
King For A Couple Of Days
WhitestMonkeh!U'Know
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 4864
June 22nd, 2006 at 06:49pm
wow!
I love it.
The ending was great! Very Happy
neen bean
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neen bean
Age: 31
Gender: Female
Posts: 10733

Blog
June 22nd, 2006 at 07:04pm
That was a very good poem. I loved the ending lines.
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
The Doctor
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786

Mibba Blog
June 22nd, 2006 at 07:11pm
It's ok.. rather cliche and the rhyme scheme seemed a bit forced in places.

Keep trying yo.
Give 'Em Hell Kid
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Give 'Em Hell Kid
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 267
June 22nd, 2006 at 07:20pm
I liked it a lot
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