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Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
  | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:07am Hermph. You guys were right. I can't do it, I can't stop writting. I have sooo many poems built up inside of me, soo so many ideas. Grrrr. I've been avoiding writting for like months. This won't be my best....
Those eyes.
Those eyes I stare into every day.
Trying so hard to uncover
the person underneath it all.
The make up, liberty spikes,
band tees and chains.
She can't hide from me.
That sad little girl, afraid to
take the next step.
She hides behind that mirror,
but I know the whole story.
Her eyes say it all.
That boy.
That boy I long to hold.
I want nothing more than to
spend the night in his arms.
I want to read the story written
across his wrists. Press kisses to
the tender scars of passion.
I want to see him. Not just the
anyone he wants to be in photographs.
I want to find the boy hidden in his mirror.
I love that boy.
These words.
These words that flood my head,
heart, and soul. I never write them down,
because my hands have minds of their own.
To you they may be pleasant metaphores,
beautiful words, something to enjoy.
To me, these words are my entire life,
displayed in stanzas and verses.
I live for these words.
I live these words.....
PS: Happy anniversary Stevo.... |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:09am YAY!
Another poem.
This one is incredibly sweet. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:13am Awe, hehehe. Thankies! *fixes typo* |
Robin Sparkles
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 30432
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:39am It's really sweet, beautiful and touching.
I love this poem! ^_^
=O Anniversary! Aww ^_^ |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:41am † Prisoner Of Society †:It's really sweet, beautiful and touching.
I love this poem! ^_^
=O Anniversary! Aww ^_^ Yup... ten months. |
clark
GSBitch
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 79047 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:41am It's great.  |
Robin Sparkles
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 30432
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:41am (Self Inflicted Coma):† Prisoner Of Society †:It's really sweet, beautiful and touching.
I love this poem! ^_^
=O Anniversary! Aww ^_^ Yup... ten months. Congrats |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | June 22nd, 2006 at 08:49am Woohoo, you wrote another one.
That's awsome. |
Meski
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Male
Posts: 14856
| June 22nd, 2006 at 09:14am You did a great job at the ending, my favourite part, I liked it alot |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | June 22nd, 2006 at 10:59am Awwww, it's real sweet
I liked how you set it out too, in the 3 stanzas about a different subject.
But it is awfully damn sweet |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019
| June 22nd, 2006 at 01:43pm I really like this one. The words and meaning were good. ^_^ |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| June 22nd, 2006 at 01:55pm I think you need a bit of a self-esteem boost, my dear. This poem was beautiful, and you should be proud, dammit! 
As Ellen said, I like the verses being about a different subject. It worked well. And I adored the ending, as well. |
Garrett Hanlund
This Board Is My Home
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 30801
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:24pm Zomigarsh, thank you all. Heh... my self-esteem level is a zero. |
Kid_Gates
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 289 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:26pm I like it... 'tis good.. |
Addison Montgomery.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 7078
| June 25th, 2006 at 11:40am It goodles |
Dehren McGhengland
Rotting On Here
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 49206 | June 25th, 2006 at 11:44am It's pretty good.  |
Emily-Cool
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 6657 | June 25th, 2006 at 11:49am oohh i really like that, the way you set it out was brillient! well done. |
