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*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:32pm These words are from the heart,
spilling from my pen.
I will show my feelings within
and where I've always been.
It may be hard to understand,
but I come as me
You are my friend
I consider this true...
I just hope I am of you
a friendconsidered clearly as true
You can tell me anything
please know that it will last
I will do anything asked..
as long as pain goes unmasked
my love for you, friends or not
is forever storng; no questions asked |
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645
 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:36pm (Offtopic) Have you made a newbie thread?
Anyway, it was good, i think you should add to it a bit, but otherwise it was quite nice.  |
*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:38pm O.o I'm not new though. So no I haven't I guess. I've been here for more than a year. |
Kid_Gates
Geek
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 289 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:39pm It's good!!  |
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:40pm Frozen Daiquiri:(Offtopic) Have you made a newbie thread?
Anyway, it was good, i think you should add to it a bit, but otherwise it was quite nice.
Nevermind that offtopic thing, i guess i just have never seen yours.....
i look at everybody's so.....yeah, im not obsessed! |
*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:42pm Well, I used to be g-d_lovr. But also, my mom is paranoid and doesn't let me on the computer. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:44pm It started off okay, but then the flow and the rhyme got a bit messed up. =/ |
*Death*Do*Us*Part*
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 5 | June 22nd, 2006 at 06:49pm It's not supposed to be all flowy and rhyme-y. It's suppose to come from the heart. |
I Am So Beautiful! FUCK!
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1019
| June 22nd, 2006 at 06:55pm That's really good. I like the end. I think it suits. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| June 22nd, 2006 at 07:14pm That reminds me so much of this.
I am proud of the ruins I'm left with,
Of every bit of ash on my shoes.
My prospects will burn down till daylight;
Only granted a pass for bold farewells.
I shall let go of my creations;
The foundations of my distincion.
Just demonstrate your banal domination,
And bid for my honour.
But I'm not suggesting anything.. |
Give 'Em Hell Kid
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 267 | June 22nd, 2006 at 07:24pm Apu! At the Kwik-e-Mart:It's good!! |
