Their Own Personal Enemy..

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Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
June 30th, 2006 at 01:57pm
I really love it Very Happy

Just one question. Did you mean to use 'His affection for the bété noiré grows strong, but its wrong and unfaithful' twice, changing the he/she?
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Inari
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538
June 30th, 2006 at 02:04pm
That was cool.
I loved this line:
They were meant for each other in their own little, yet titanic way
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Peter Petrelli
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161
June 30th, 2006 at 02:23pm
Inari:
That was cool.
I loved this line:
They were meant for each other in their own little, yet titanic way


I meant to say that as well Very Happy I adored that line so much.
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