[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
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Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 3rd, 2006 at 07:09am what are friends for?
im here for you in hail, rain or shine
no matter the weather this friendship will be forever.
please understand that.
everything has changed but i wanna be your friend
before and after all of this
and during.
please.
we may hurt, cry and laugh
but in the end
everything will be alright
as long as we hear the music.
i just wrote this now... my friend and i are having a hard time so i needed to write about it. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | July 3rd, 2006 at 08:51am Hmm .. it's okay |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | July 3rd, 2006 at 09:05am TreCoolIstSoGeil:Hmm .. it's okay Yeah, there's nothing really special about it and it didn't really flow. |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 4th, 2006 at 07:15am i know. this sucked to me... i just wanted to know what other people thought of it, thats all .
sorry for making you guys reading it. |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 4th, 2006 at 07:21am ^Angels_Dust^:i know. this sucked to me... i just wanted to know what other people thought of it, thats all .
sorry for making you guys reading it.
Don't be sorry!! 
Everyone is respected on here for submitting their poetry, and no one
is saying the poem sucked, they're just giving you constructive criticism...
It's good that people aren't just saying "Good job" cause you can learn
more from critiques...good or bad...
Anyways...
I like the poem.
And share more with us, if you will...  |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 4th, 2006 at 08:05am i will.
i have posted a few on here already.
if u look at my myspace blog i have a few there but thats bout it.
i didnt wanna post a few others cos they are too heavy. yeah |
