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Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
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Mibba
July 3rd, 2006 at 10:16pm
read me new stroy please Smile

http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/fan/story/6960/0/

I worked hard on this, sooo... if you would, read, comment, and rate? Smile[/url]
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
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Age: 47
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Mibba Blog
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:17pm
I read this as I edited it to post it... It's a different slant on things... interesting.
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999

Mibba
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:20pm
Smile thanks? Im not to sure how to respond
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
Banach95
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Gender: Female
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Mibba Blog
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:22pm
It's good writing.... I'll be looking to reading more Wink

Sorry about being vague.. didn't mean to...
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999

Mibba
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:24pm
oh ok hehe. But, how do I post the next bit? Cause there doesnt seem to be a link...
Banach95
King For A Couple Of Days
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Mibba Blog
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:25pm
Your Mom Is A Man Whore:
oh ok hehe. But, how do I post the next bit? Cause there doesnt seem to be a link...
http://www.geekstinkbreath.net/board/viewtopic.php?t=45158

read this Smile
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999

Mibba
July 3rd, 2006 at 11:25pm
much appreciated, thanks
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999

Mibba
July 16th, 2006 at 10:12am
anyways... read it?
Pickle
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Mibba
July 16th, 2006 at 11:40am
It's definatly interesting. Your title is what made me look twice at it. I'm curious to see how that comes into play.

My biggest concern is that there's not as much emotion in it that should be. You're trying to up it but it's not flowing very well to the reader. Don't focus so much on the words for emotion, but the actions and the small stuff.

Very interesting. I shall try to keep up with it.
Rhiannon.
King For A Couple Of Days
Rhiannon.
Age: 27
Gender: Female
Posts: 2999

Mibba
July 18th, 2006 at 01:05pm
ok. Smile
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