peas lover.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3502
 | July 5th, 2006 at 07:05am Your Living Dead Girl
Is it my fault I lost all my faith?
Many days ago I have fallen out of grace.
I wander through the nights like a silent wraith.
Is it my fault doubts are slowing down my pace?
Long ago, I gave you the best in me,
I've been taken for granted.
You've brought up the worst in me,
Now I'll let you reap the seed of hate you planted.
I'm your living dead girl, I haunt you in your dreams,
I linger in the doorways, upon you, silently, I creep.
Just this once, I wanna hear your screams,
My revenge patiently awaits for you to fall asleep.
And when all of this is over, this wraith will come alive.
And when the blood clots, you know I won't care,
I will rest in peace, I'll take my finaly dive.
No need for you to say you hate me, don't you even dare,
Because both you and I know I was too much for you to bear.
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I honestly think this one sucks, but I felt the need for someone to see it. |
Jigsawess
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 2640 | July 5th, 2006 at 07:29pm It doesn't suck.
It's not the best I've ever read, but it's good. There's some good lines in there.
=) |
DaveyHavok666
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 250 | July 6th, 2006 at 01:06am It's awesome keep writing poem.. and If you do PM me when there is more! |
peas lover.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 3502
| July 6th, 2006 at 04:13am Okay, I will....Thanks....I have another one...I'll go post it now. |
