Guran
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 | July 6th, 2006 at 09:31am Fragile hearts all torn into pieces,
Wandering souls led home,
All those nights he spent preaching,
Leading us all into doom
Heavy breathing slow and deep,
Waiting for the end,
Holding in his hands the future,
Nothing to hold on
So rip my heart out,
Tear my soul apart,
Take my endless life!
Hear the screaming,
Watching it feeding,
On our endless pain!
Darkness of his heart emerges,
Ready to take us down,
Can he handle all that power?
When it gets the better of us all
Hold me tight,
Cuz this might be our last night,
Hold me close,
For tomorrow might never come
Take our pain away,
Take it all today,
Before it’s too late
Call your mother,
Call your father,
Tell them what you did
We have no way,
Of escaping our fate
We have no way,
Of getting away!!
So rip my heart out,
Tear my soul apart,
Take my endless life!
Please take me,
For away
Please take me,
With you today
Please, can you,
Hold me for last night |
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| July 6th, 2006 at 12:39pm It was okay. Not terribly original. I think you can do better. |
DaveyHavok666
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Posts: 250 | July 7th, 2006 at 08:59pm I Have no clue whats wrong with people these days! THIS WAS A GREAT POEM! PLEASE keep writng~! |
Guran
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| July 8th, 2006 at 07:36am heh thanks  and I shall keep on writing  |
Guran
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| July 10th, 2006 at 08:27am okay thanks for sharing your opinions |
