Sarah. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4490 | July 7th, 2006 at 01:07am This poem is for ym girlfriend, our 6 month anniversery is coming up soon.
I know its short but I suck at long poems so yea...
And also the last part, "You stole my heart but you can keep it" is our favorite quote, I didn't make it up lol.
Good or no? I'm going to give it to her but I just wanna know if its ok first
We’ve been together 6 amazing months,
And we’re still going strong,
We’ll be together soon,
I swear it won’t be long.
We’ll sit together under the midnight moon,
I’ll play our favorite song.
If only I could feel the warmth of your hug,
I’d be even more sure that this is love.
You stole my heart,
But I’m pretty sure you can keep it. |
Sarah. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4490 | July 7th, 2006 at 10:26pm Alright!
Thanks for the feedback... |
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 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| July 7th, 2006 at 10:36pm It was sweet. Not the best poem-wise, but I'm sure your girlfriend will absolutely love it.  |
Sarah. King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 4490 | July 7th, 2006 at 10:38pm Hardcore Panda!!1:It was sweet. Not the best poem-wise, but I'm sure your girlfriend will absolutely love it. 
Thanks, I know its not very good writing lol, I'm not too good when it comes to that but I tried  |