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Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 7th, 2006 at 08:28pm Mini skirts and rosy lips
Dancing in Mommy's hooker heels
His fragile little butterfly
Standing on her toes
Thirteen crashed and boys came through
The window at night and into her bed
While he yearned to taste her innocence
Until as last he was filled to the tip
But all he got was melted butter
From an unpure daughter of a slut
A bitter-sweet consummation
And a slap across the face
Daddy's little girl grew up too soon
What a bloody shame |
DaveyHavok666
Geek
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 250 | July 8th, 2006 at 02:39pm ...This was an odd poem. BUT I LOVED IT! |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | July 8th, 2006 at 03:35pm Wow, I really like that. Can you explain it? I love it when you explain your poems because then I can see how different our views on it were. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 8th, 2006 at 03:38pm I love it!  I don't really know what else to say. I mean, it could be worked on, but there's something I really love about it. It's raw. |
The Punk Messiah
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 501 | July 8th, 2006 at 03:39pm that's really smart.
I love it !
Well done :] |
tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83 | July 9th, 2006 at 11:28am international_idiot:I love it! I don't really know what else to say. I mean, it could be worked on, but there's something I really love about it. It's raw.
i liked it too whats ur point of view on it? |
tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83 | July 9th, 2006 at 11:29am opps wrong one!! |
tAcOs!-Jay
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: 34
Gender: Male
Posts: 83 | July 9th, 2006 at 11:29am Hardcore Panda!!1:Wow, I really like that. Can you explain it? I love it when you explain your poems because then I can see how different our views on it were.
yeah i like it too this is the one i wanted ...yup yup...whats ur point of viewon the poem? |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 9th, 2006 at 02:27pm gothchick13:Hardcore Panda!!1:Wow, I really like that. Can you explain it? I love it when you explain your poems because then I can see how different our views on it were.
yeah i like it too this is the one i wanted ...yup yup...whats ur point of viewon the poem? At first it sounds like the girl is just 'growing up' and getting into all the sorts of trouble that girls tend to go through. But then [this is probably incredibly wrong] it sounds like 'Daddy' is like molesting her or something.  That's, uh, I guess my view on it.  Also, there's hints at the fact that she's turning out like her mother, who I guess would be a whore. |
Nathalie.
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 11756 | July 9th, 2006 at 02:57pm Amazing! I love it! |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | July 9th, 2006 at 04:08pm Cool. o_o |
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912 | July 9th, 2006 at 04:12pm That was a really cool poem. 
I like it. |
Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 9th, 2006 at 04:16pm Hardcore Panda!!1:gothchick13:Hardcore Panda!!1:Wow, I really like that. Can you explain it? I love it when you explain your poems because then I can see how different our views on it were.
yeah i like it too this is the one i wanted ...yup yup...whats ur point of viewon the poem? At first it sounds like the girl is just 'growing up' and getting into all the sorts of trouble that girls tend to go through. But then [this is probably incredibly wrong] it sounds like 'Daddy' is like molesting her or something. That's, uh, I guess my view on it. Also, there's hints at the fact that she's turning out like her mother, who I guess would be a whore.
No, you're totally right!
That's exactly what I was thinking, and I'm so glad someone caught that.
Thank you!! Haha that made me happy to know that someone actually
tried interpreting my crazy poetry and got it.
Anyways... |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 9th, 2006 at 04:24pm Yesss! I got it! I think that's the first one of your poems that I actually interpreted the same way you did. I love the way you write. It's just...awesome. |
