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  | July 9th, 2006 at 07:48pm Misty eyes dimmed under the dark
curtain as I scanned my pseudo-
holograph. The holocaust of
words slapped against the paper
as an ear drum bursts under pressure.
The lines seemed silent but
lurking in the depths screamed
a lascivious voice from the
larynx. It slowly faded to a
lackadaisical lamentation once
used by a small girl mirror-reflecting
my days spent. It seems I’m spent.
Melodies are disintegrating into
a defunct diaphragm. The lines
on the paper chortle at the lines
maturing on my skin. I’m trying
to evade, but it’s just too damn
difficult when you stand amongst
the self-proclaimed elite…
Alone, but surrounded...
Invading innocence over my life.
I hummed and stared at the sky,
It’s not respect…It’s fear… |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
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Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 9th, 2006 at 08:41pm Very good. I like it a lot. |
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Gender: Female
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| July 9th, 2006 at 09:14pm Nice usage of alliteration. I like the poem a lot, seemed original.  |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 10th, 2006 at 03:49am Wow.
Love it. |
Nathalie.
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Posts: 11756 | July 10th, 2006 at 05:52am Love it. |
