Sweet Freedom

AuthorMessage
The Doctor
Falling In Love With The Board
The Doctor
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 8786

Mibba Blog
July 10th, 2006 at 07:26pm
*shrugs* don't ask me.

I close my room door,
tightly and make sure no other soul,
can get in. Just you and I.
I start to bite my nails,
so nervous, I'm going blind, I cannot see,
where are you? Oh.
My breathing quickens,
yours too. An oxygen filled race.
Until we collaspe onto each other.
A sweet taster and we set about,
just a few mere barriers left.
Again we meet.
Doubt crosses my mind,
but I cast those prudes from existance.
Just you and I.
Soon, the screams grow louder,
those echo around the room.
A primative call. Freedom!
Freedom of what?
As we join our souls one last time,
a moments silence,
and a deep breath.
snowcherry
King For A Couple Of Days
snowcherry
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 3912
July 11th, 2006 at 01:10pm
I loved the last bit.
But I like your other poems better.
Register