TheFaggot
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4675 | July 11th, 2006 at 09:09pm I told you to listen
Not to lie
You told me to calm down
I said goodbye
I thought you were my wish
From that night
You turned out to be
Full of yourself and full of fright
I was broken, I was hurt
Way before You came along
You never knew, you never thought
And I’m singing the same old song…
I thought things would get better
If I only knew back then
You thought you did, but never knew
What, where, who and when
I tried to tell you, time after time
Did I make an impact, or none at all?
You still think life’s always like that
Not a worry, not a fright and no risk of hitting the wall
I tried to tell you everything
I promise, I really did!
But you were never able to understand
All the lies and the things I hid.
My wish was in the end just that you would understand what they were for.
Giving up your wishes like that can be dangerous. Sneaks up on you. Like you did on me.
I’m scared, and you thought you understood that.
If you did, you’d be by my side NOW, not THEN. |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 11th, 2006 at 09:20pm  i love it  expecially the ending. |
TheFaggot
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4675 | July 12th, 2006 at 11:32am Stone Cold Tinkerbell: i love it expecially the ending. Thanks! |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | July 12th, 2006 at 11:54am I rully like that. |
rollerpig
GSBitch
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 62283 | July 12th, 2006 at 12:17pm I like it too :] |
TheFaggot
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4675 | July 12th, 2006 at 12:43pm *blushes* fankchoo! |
CrazyEyes
Geek
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 112 | July 12th, 2006 at 12:47pm Love it! |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
| July 12th, 2006 at 04:51pm Hate to be the party pooper but I actually only liked
I told you to listen
Not to lie
The rest just sounded cliché to me.
But I'm really picky most of the time so yeah. |
Basketcase463
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: -
Gender: Female
Posts: 4608 | July 12th, 2006 at 05:03pm me loves it :p |
TheFaggot
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 4675 | July 13th, 2006 at 03:11pm Ella:Hate to be the party pooper but I actually only liked
I told you to listen
Not to lie
The rest just sounded cliché to me.
But I'm really picky most of the time so yeah. Thanks- I myself think it's way more cliché than what I usually write but it was on my mind, so... It's written about a VERY cliché person. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 13th, 2006 at 03:15pm Ella:Hate to be the party pooper but I actually only liked
I told you to listen
Not to lie
The rest just sounded cliché to me.
I kind of have to agree. It didn't seem as forced as it could've done, which was good; it had a regular rhythm, and I really liked that. But overall, I didn't really like the poem. Sorry. |
