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| Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days  Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976 | Actually, it doesn't have a title. But if I gave it one, that'd what it'd be. Anywho, I'm not too proud of this poem, but read and comment anyway. I'd really appreciate it.  ------------- He's got a way with twisting sweet words That flatter the most shallow types of girls They giggle, they blush, they lay it all down No one has their gaurd up when you're around. What a sweet-talker you've become Watch your step, you're coming undone Stumbing over those phrases in your head You can't take back the things you just said. Walked out on, How does it feel? Nice job, smooth-talker You've found someone real. Your lips are sewn shut Your tongue is nailed down Thought she was just another girl? Looks like you were wrong. |
| davey jones. Falling In Love With The Board  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 7018   | I like this. It's a hell of alot better than what I could do. Kudos for you. |
| Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976 | Handguns For Hearts:Thank you. |
| read profile information. King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2463 | I like how you worded it, if that makes any sense. I love it. |
| Garrett Hanlund This Board Is My Home  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 30801 | Pook.  |
| ave Geek Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 260 | |
| Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976 | Thanks. |
| FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921 | I like this one a lot.  The flow felt smooth and the rhyming didn't feel ridiculously cheesy. Great job! |
| rollerpig GSBitch  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 62283 | I like it. A lot! |
| newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495 | |
| B.J Falling In Love With The Board Age: - Gender: Male Posts: 8105 | I quite like it It went a long nicely good job |
| Kurtni Admin  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 34289 | |
| Arcane-Inamorata King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 3278 | |
| lily allen. Falling In Love With The Board  Age: - Gender: - Posts: 5232 | |
| Jordyn King For A Couple Of Days Age: - Gender: - Posts: 3976 | Thanks, everyone. |
| Miley Cyrus Basket Case  Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 15185 | |
| madelyntastic{b.m.s}© Geek Age: - Gender: - Posts: 231 | Does this mean I have to get laid now? Or later? Good poem!  |
| Killed To Be A Goth Angel King For A Couple Of Days  Age: 39 Gender: Female Posts: 2988 | i love it!! its great |
| The Rev Addict  Age: 38 Gender: Male Posts: 14004 | i LOVE reading your poems i haven't been dissapointed, and i dont think i ever will. Keep up the Amazing work <3 |
| Tahm York This Board Is My Home  Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 31394 | that's like.. how I feel about a certain guy. exactly how I feel about him. I really freakin love that poem. it's great  |
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