bi_bu_ra
Rotting On Here
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 49428
 | July 13th, 2006 at 03:25pm You're putting her out of your pocket again, your faithful friend
compliantly and with talent to give you unconsciously pleasure
When you light her up, you get lost in cigarette smoke of delight
During the disappearing of greyness it's only seen your smile
Which used to exist only for my fragile emotions
but now is caused only for her -
tabacco stick which pushed me away so quickly. |
Tahm York
This Board Is My Home
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 31394
 | July 13th, 2006 at 03:27pm interesting
it's purty good
better than anything I could do |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 13th, 2006 at 03:43pm It was interesting and I kinda liked it, although the flow was pretty much non-existent. |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 13th, 2006 at 05:02pm That's different
and incredibly interesting. |
