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tomamazon GSBitch
 Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 68084
 | July 14th, 2006 at 03:32pm Okay, as Cassie will know, I've been going through a 'phaze'. Charlie, yar. So I wrote a poem. Just call it venting.
Drop dead, you inconsiderate fool
I can't take your mind-torture
Venting years of clichéd past
Jealousy seems to over-take
Scarce flashes of your smile
Why the hell did you change?
Waiting for the day you'll call
Final arrangements complete it
Sceptical wishes against your downfall
Your stares slice through the hatred
A returning past, a leaving future
Drop dead, you inconsiderate fool.
I need you more than she ever will..
I know you won't like it, but its venting dammit! |
Inari King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 37 Gender: Female Posts: 2538 | July 14th, 2006 at 03:35pm 
Sucky life sucks sometimes.
But at least you have poetry to burn it out. |
tomamazon GSBitch
 Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 68084
 | July 14th, 2006 at 03:36pm Yeah....=(
I want him. xD |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 34 Gender: Female Posts: 2921
| July 14th, 2006 at 03:49pm It wasn't bad. It felt choppy, but it worked. Not your best, obviously, but still pretty good.
Now go and steal that boy! XD |
tomamazon GSBitch
 Age: 29 Gender: Female Posts: 68084
 | July 14th, 2006 at 03:58pm Oh, I wish.
>_<
thanks! |
Addison Montgomery. Falling In Love With The Board
 Age: 30 Gender: Female Posts: 7078
 | July 15th, 2006 at 05:34am We'll mope together Gawdfrey...even though we are anyway. |
[Broken Pretty] Idiot
![[Broken Pretty]](/data/board-avatars/empty.gif) Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 572 | July 15th, 2006 at 05:41am its nice.
i feel the same way.. yet i have the boy but im fighting for him.. dont ask. |
Bittersweet World Banned
 Age: 36 Gender: Female Posts: 28301
 | July 15th, 2006 at 05:53am I like it. Simple and to the point.
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newagecarny Was Here Two Weeks Ago
 Age: 33 Gender: Female Posts: 42495
| July 15th, 2006 at 11:18am Hate is never an easy topic to write about, and not many people can pull it off but since it's venting it doesn't really matter, does it?
It was pretty good, actually. |
Peter Petrelli King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: 35 Gender: Female Posts: 4161 | July 15th, 2006 at 01:32pm Not your best, but hell, venting is always good. It wasn't too bad, though.
I feel your pain. Badly. |
*~*Hula*~* King For A Couple Of Days
 Age: - Gender: - Posts: 2448 | July 15th, 2006 at 02:10pm I thought that's awesome |