Please Drop Dead..

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tomamazon
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Mibba Blog
July 14th, 2006 at 03:32pm
Okay, as Cassie will know, I've been going through a 'phaze'. Charlie, yar. So I wrote a poem. Just call it venting. Cool

Drop dead, you inconsiderate fool
I can't take your mind-torture
Venting years of clichéd past

Jealousy seems to over-take
Scarce flashes of your smile
Why the hell did you change?

Waiting for the day you'll call
Final arrangements complete it
Sceptical wishes against your downfall

Your stares slice through the hatred
A returning past, a leaving future
Drop dead, you inconsiderate fool.

I need you more than she ever will..



I know you won't like it, but its venting dammit!
Inari
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July 14th, 2006 at 03:35pm
Hug
Sucky life sucks sometimes.
But at least you have poetry to burn it out.
tomamazon
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Mibba Blog
July 14th, 2006 at 03:36pm
Yeah....=(



I want him. xD
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
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Mibba
July 14th, 2006 at 03:49pm
It wasn't bad. It felt choppy, but it worked. Not your best, obviously, but still pretty good. Cool

Now go and steal that boy! XD
tomamazon
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Mibba Blog
July 14th, 2006 at 03:58pm
Oh, I wish.


>_<


thanks!
Addison Montgomery.
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Mibba Blog
July 15th, 2006 at 05:34am
We'll mope together Gawdfrey...even though we are anyway.
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
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July 15th, 2006 at 05:41am
its nice.
i feel the same way.. yet i have the boy but im fighting for him.. dont ask.
Bittersweet World
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July 15th, 2006 at 05:53am
I like it. Simple and to the point.

Hug
newagecarny
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Mibba
July 15th, 2006 at 11:18am
Hate is never an easy topic to write about, and not many people can pull it off but since it's venting it doesn't really matter, does it?

It was pretty good, actually.
Peter Petrelli
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July 15th, 2006 at 01:32pm
Not your best, but hell, venting is always good. It wasn't too bad, though.

I feel your pain. Badly.
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July 15th, 2006 at 02:10pm
I thought that's awesome
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