[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
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Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 15th, 2006 at 05:39am i wrote this in my english class. im currently hate by a few people at the moment.
anger of all emotions is the one that causes the most pain.
not everything in this world can result in happiness yet not anger.
oncean crisis begins it does not end in love.
think of the capulets and montagues, they broke to pieces because of their anger for one another
but is it one another or themselves that is the anger?
i think its pretty shitty.. but i decided to post it anyways. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 11:29am i think its kool |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 17th, 2006 at 02:36am thank you. i try.. personally i didnt like it but hey, whatever. thats my opinion as the writer. |
DudeO
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 31
Gender: Male
Posts: 2543
 | July 17th, 2006 at 09:19pm Nice poem  I liked it. It kind of depressed me for a moment but it was good.
Guess what? I played Dance Dance Revolution today. RHYTHM AND POLICE WOOT WOOT WOOT! |
whersermind
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 165
| July 17th, 2006 at 09:27pm it started ok, but the last two lines were really good, especially the last one, it makes me think |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 17th, 2006 at 09:34pm i like it  |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 18th, 2006 at 12:03am thanks you guys.
your comments and stuff are important.
cheers. |
