| Author | Message |
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Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 11:37am I see you
crying in your dark room
Waiting for someone
To save you
You're lost and miserable
And need help finding who you really are
Are you like your parents?
Are you like your friends?
Who are you?
I don't know you
Are you like me?
Are you like her?
Who are you?
I've never seen you here before
And yet.....
And yet you look familiar
Like a face I've seen before
But there's a fog over my eyes
And I can't recognize you
Who are you? |
steady riot.
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 2907 | July 16th, 2006 at 11:41am It was decent. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 07:48pm u seem to never like my poems |
Megan.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 6962 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:04pm One, your avatar makes Billie Joe look fat.
Two, your poem was.. okay. ._. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:06pm Billie is sexy no matter wat.....ok...kool |
Electic Current
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1682 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:11pm It was okay I suppose. |
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645
 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:17pm um well it was okay...  |
punk bitch
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
Age: -
Gender: -
Posts: 17 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:22pm cool |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:34pm eh.... it was alright |
robotchicken.
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 8423
 | July 16th, 2006 at 08:46pm Greenday_luver13:u seem to never like my poems Maybe you write sucky poems :/ joking, its just her opinion really. |
Arcane-Inamorata
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 3278
| July 16th, 2006 at 09:28pm I am Abigail Johanssen-Smith, queen of Mars, and also the greatest pirate the universe has ever known...
Oh... its a poem...
heh. not bad |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 16th, 2006 at 09:36pm Very mediocre. Bad flow, cliché, mundane words. Work on it. |
FeeneyKid
Jackass
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 1325 | July 16th, 2006 at 09:40pm Im a respite worker, Im in the ninth grade and I have always been really flamboyant and eccentric |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 17th, 2006 at 02:41am it was... alright. |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
Gender: -
Posts: 179 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:07am ok...kool....wat do i need to work on? |
