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babydobby Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie Age: - Gender: - Posts: 10	July 18th, 2006 at 06:23am Hiding within the shadows is the soul of the world I once cherished. I spent every last hour and breath aching to be what they’ve always wanted to be. Yet I still fail. I now live in a deprived land, disguised as a society obsessed with perfection. Alone I wonder if there will ever be an end to this portrait of naivety and beauty. We yearn to find someone to love, but no good comes from it. Instead we are hit with a stereotype of man himself. Criticising our every move and judgement. VERY FEW OF MY FRIENDS HAVE READ THIS POEM BUT HEY. I CANT EVEN REMEMBER WHAT IT WAS ABOUT.
Forever Addict Age: 32 Gender: Female Posts: 14866	July 18th, 2006 at 12:30pm That is so true! I love it! great job.

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babydobby
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie

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July 18th, 2006 at 06:23am

Hiding within the shadows is the soul of the world I once cherished. I spent every last hour and breath aching to be what they’ve always wanted to be. Yet I still fail.
I now live in a deprived land, disguised as a society obsessed with perfection. Alone I wonder if there will ever be an end to this portrait of naivety and beauty.
We yearn to find someone to love, but no good comes from it. Instead we are hit with a stereotype of man himself. Criticising our every move and judgement.

VERY FEW OF MY FRIENDS HAVE READ THIS POEM BUT HEY. I CANT
EVEN REMEMBER WHAT IT WAS ABOUT.

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July 18th, 2006 at 12:30pm

That is so true! I love it! great job. Very Happy

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