babydobby
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 10 | July 18th, 2006 at 06:27am Touch the core and numb the pain. Things will be better soon they tell me. But what do they know? Life is so perfect for so many melodramatic and superficial people who just waste it away. And so hard to grasp for the people who don’t deserve it.
Stand up tall and take the blame. So many questions remain unanswered. Will the ever be answered? The weight of life is unbearable for so many strangers who’ll never get help. And so easy to bear for the people who destroy these strangers.
THIS POEM IS JUST ABOUT THE TYPICAL WORLD WE LIVE IN. WHAT MORE
CAN I SAY?? |
Orgy
Geek
Age: 34
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Posts: 179 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:49am koolness |
Mellon * Collie
Geek
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Posts: 245 | July 18th, 2006 at 11:47am uhhh... yeah... okay. |
Peter Petrelli
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 35
Gender: Female
Posts: 4161 | July 18th, 2006 at 11:56am Ummm, that wasn't really poetry. I barely made it past the first line. If you divided it up into stanzas it would make it easier to read.
Once I managed to read the whole thing, it wasn't too bad. But I had to make an effort. |
