*they_call_me Ri*
Geek
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 177 | July 18th, 2006 at 07:09pm Push my head back into the pillow,
Tears drench the cloth.
SHe's the one who will listen.
No judgement passes the lips.
Even when I have no home,
I have no life.
No one to lean on,
Every person I love,
Is a fake.
When will I find happiness.
Unless this thing called happiness,
Is not for me.
Her reassurance;
How long will this temperary heaven last? |
The Rev
Addict
Age: 38
Gender: Male
Posts: 14004 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:06pm meh.. didn't really like it. |
Toxic Teeth
Idiot
Age: 30
Gender: Female
Posts: 645
 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:19pm I get the moral out of it......and i liked that much, but the way you put it...might need some more work....i dunno im no expert  |
