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rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:40pm Beauty is the morning sun
That breaks the dark of night,
And starts the day with rays of love
And makes the world feel right.
Beauty is an honest smile
That brings a heart to tears,
And gives it hope to start the day
And scares away the fears.
Beauty is the soft blue eyes
That look into the soul,
And sees the wish for starry nights
With someone it can hold.
You're the sun that lights my life
And warms my heart with love.
With eyes of blue and honest smiles
An angel from above. |
Dead End Girl
Addict
Age: 32
Gender: Female
Posts: 10219 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:42pm I usually don't like your style but...I love this <3 |
rage;love;clark
Geek
Age: -
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Posts: 494 | July 18th, 2006 at 10:43pm Mechanical Annie:I usually don't like your style but...I love this <3
Why thank you |
[Broken Pretty]
Idiot
Age: 36
Gender: Female
Posts: 572 | July 19th, 2006 at 08:18am its very pretty. |
rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | July 19th, 2006 at 10:22am barry_.:its very pretty.
thank you |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
 | July 19th, 2006 at 11:06am Wow, not forced at all. I love it.  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | July 19th, 2006 at 11:08am Hardcore Panda!!1:Wow, not forced at all. I love it.
thanks |
Jay Tee
Had A Life Before GSB
Age: 36
Gender: Male
Posts: 26777
 | July 19th, 2006 at 11:11am I think thats really great. You're basically summing up beauty - it doesn't have to be lavish and over the top. Beauty is sweet and simple, just like your poem. The rhyming isn't as blatant as usual which makes it all the more great.
Its a pretty little ditty if you will. |
rage;love;clark
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Posts: 494 | July 19th, 2006 at 11:15am 409 Coffeemaker:I think thats really great. You're basically summing up beauty - it doesn't have to be lavish and over the top. Beauty is sweet and simple, just like your poem. The rhyming isn't as blatant as usual which makes it all the more great.
Its a pretty little ditty if you will.
why thanks |
Spontaneous_Combustion
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 8 | July 20th, 2006 at 10:26am Yeah it has simple lyrics that everyone kinda knows yet it's new and i think it's genious how you put those wors together in such a natural way. really beautiful. |
Spontaneous_Combustion
Shoot Me, I'm A Newbie
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Posts: 8 | July 20th, 2006 at 10:27am oh, and don't say thanks all the time XD I know you're thankful -hehe- |
Bat_Country_Chick
Idiot
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 842
| July 20th, 2006 at 10:36am I love it!!  |
rage;love;clark
Geek
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Posts: 494 | July 20th, 2006 at 11:10am Spontaneous_Combustion:oh, and don't say thanks all the time XD I know you're thankful -hehe-
THAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAANKS!!!!
lol
sorry i had to |
