Poem I wrote about 9/11 when I was in second grade...

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Miss Misfit
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:04pm
It began as an ordinary day
It ended in a terrifiing why.

Firetrucks raging people parying
lives where lost on that horrible day.

All thats left is ashes
From the for plane crashes.

The first one struck are military powers
the next two hit the twin towers.
the heros on the fourth plane were not cowards.

the terroist attack ended within hours.



Yeah...I was a little shit when I wrote that. Rolling Eyes
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:36pm
ahh fine people. dont comment. >.<
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:41pm
you wrote that in second grade? that's pretty good.
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:44pm
i couldnt even write that good of a poem now.....and im 10th grade!
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:50pm
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i couldnt even write that good of a poem now.....and im 10th grade!


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July 18th, 2006 at 11:54pm
good for a 2nd grader
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:55pm
i love it !!!! thats really good =)
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:57pm
thats good.
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July 18th, 2006 at 11:59pm
Miss Misfit:
Frozen Daiquiri:
i couldnt even write that good of a poem now.....and im 10th grade!


Very Happy
Thanks.

you are most welcome! Cool
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July 19th, 2006 at 12:01am
sounds really cool
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July 19th, 2006 at 02:59am
sounds really good for a horrible accident to inspire that. Smile
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Mibba
July 19th, 2006 at 11:05am
That's actually pretty good for second grade.
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July 19th, 2006 at 10:00pm
Hardcore Panda!!1:
That's actually pretty good for second grade.
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Mibba
July 20th, 2006 at 09:00am
It's good but you are aware that the terrorist attack didn't end within hours, right? Pain will forever remain.
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July 20th, 2006 at 09:03am
Ella:
It's good but you are aware that the terrorist attack didn't end within hours, right? Pain will forever remain.


I was in second grade...But yes I know that.
I was little and trying to make words ryhme.
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July 20th, 2006 at 09:04am
haha liked it.
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July 20th, 2006 at 09:12am
terrorists suck ass
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July 20th, 2006 at 09:13am
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Hardcore Panda!!1:
That's actually pretty good for second grade.
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July 20th, 2006 at 10:08am
It is a really good poem. You may want to check the spelling on it.
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July 20th, 2006 at 04:24pm
Jaguire13:
It is a really good poem. You may want to check the spelling on it.



yeah...I know.
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