Santa Billie
Falling In Love With The Board
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 8285 | July 19th, 2006 at 11:52pm He silently steals into your gentle soul
And gouges out a deep dark hole
His face becomes hidden in the black of night
As he fills your dreams with blinding sight
This rotting place is frighteningly cold
Yet the path he paved is of fire and gold
Your fate rests in the hollowness of white
While you follow his tattered cloak to the light
And falling back into an eternal abyss
You finally know it- this is bliss |
Inari
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 37
Gender: Female
Posts: 2538 | July 20th, 2006 at 05:54am Wow.
Opens up pretty dark.
The ending is beautiful. |
newagecarny
Was Here Two Weeks Ago
Age: 33
Gender: Female
Posts: 42495
 | July 20th, 2006 at 08:00am It's okay. |
FCPSITSGEPGEPGEPanda
King For A Couple Of Days
Age: 34
Gender: Female
Posts: 2921
| July 20th, 2006 at 11:40am I liked it. There was only one line where the flow was messed up. |
